Adding to the above: most folks don't care much about the history of the series, who performed in it earlier, or that it used to be at a historic house in Jamaica Plain.

What we do care about is that you are presenting three concerts in Somerville this fall. When you rewrite the post, please include the admission prices and how to buy tickets in advance (if you do advance sales). Also, where does the name "Notlob" come from?