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NOTLOB ACOUSTIC CONCERT SERIES AT
• September 20 ~ Greg Greenway & John Flynn, hosted by Naomi Arenberg, Producer/Host of “Folk on WGBH”.
• November 1 ~ The Folk Brothers (also appearing 11/2 in Cummington)
• November 15 ~ Mary McCaslin & Geoff Bartley w/ Diane Wilmont
Venue:
Clarendon Hill Presbyterian Church,
Doors 7:30pm
Concert 8:00pm
Suggested donation $15 ($10 for Tufts undergrads with id)
For more information about the upcoming season please read…
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LJ and Internet advice
Date: 2008-09-10 03:33 pm (UTC)You can also change "Read More..." to say something else, whatever you want it to say, by doing <lj-cut text="whatever you want..."> instead of just <lj-cut>. (You can also have multiple cuts in one post, but you can read about how to do that later if you want, it's not necessary to know here).
Also, if you want to be an effective promoter online, I highly recommend learning to write for the web, which is very very different from writing for print. In particular, you should know that for the most part, people don't read on the web until they know they want to read - mostly, they skim, and only pick a few things to spend more time on and actually read. If you present people with a large block of text, it's hard to skim, and it's hard for them to extract at a glance the information that will tell them whether this posting is something they want to spend time reading; as a result, you will turn away most people who might've been interested. They'll glance, not know whether they want to read it, and quickly move on to something else.
As a community moderator, I'm going to ask that you put an LJ-cut in this post (probably right after the list of three upcoming concert dates, right before "for more information ...").
As someone who wants to see you succeed, I'd also recommend rewriting this post so it is better suited to a web rather than print audience, though that would take more time.